Feedback/feedforward: I liked how you added lots of detail maybe next time you could write a little more. Devin
Sunday 13 March 2016
Camp diaries 2016
Description: we went to camp and it was fun. There were ten activites and they included horse riding, kayaking and rafts. We slept is cabins and there were bunks. I slept on the top bunk next to Harriet and under me was Hannah g. Our era was called poplar I was in cabin 6 and activity group 3.
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We had an awesome time didn't we? I was so proud of you :) I really enjoyed watching you tackle challenges at camp. You were able to approach those challenges with a smile on your face showing a growth mindset. Keep transferring what you have learnt about yourself into school!
ReplyDeleteMy feed far wards is that you should have tried to take the shadows away
ReplyDeleteMy feed forward is that you should have tried to take the shadows away. From Yassmine
ReplyDeleteThanks Yasmine I will try that next time
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