A day and a life for a horse camp story

I munch on hay and slurp on water. I gallop around and Humans ride me it is very exhausting. At least that is what people think… Well they are completely wrong. I do so much more so here is my story. I see lots of humans staring at me oh and my name is Minnie.

All these people start to pat me and then “click” I here my saddle and someone jumps up on me then off we go. We galloped around the black tyres and get a drink I am extremely thirsty so I have 5 slurps of water “ Ahhh.”

When I am going back to the yard I accidently start to pee… “Piss”Ops wasn't me. After that I have a bundle of hay now I can rest... but oh I fell somebody perch on my back here it goes all over again.

When another human comes over to me the human is big she is about to sit on me… What if I fall over. Ahhh I'm going to fall… No not really I'm just joking ok let's go. And that is my story.

 

Family tree

Description:Description: at et reo we wanted to make a family tree. It was really fun and sort of hard because I didn't now my full family and some where hard to do in Maori.

Big idea:we wanted to make a family tree so we could represent our family we also did them in Maori to because we that it would help other people.

Feedback/feedforward:I think you did pretty well but I think it could be a bit more clear.

Evaluation:I think I need to work on getting my work done on time but I tryed really hard.

Camp diaries 2016

Description: we went to camp and it was fun. There were ten activites and they included horse riding, kayaking and rafts. We slept is cabins and there were bunks. I slept on the top bunk next to Harriet and under me was Hannah g. Our era was called poplar I was in cabin 6 and activity group 3.

Feedback/feedforward: I liked how you added lots of detail maybe next time you could write a little more. Devin

One word art

Description: we wanted to have a one word for 2016 and my one word is sportsmanship. So what we did was make a sign. First we wrote our word and then we Coloured it in. We also took a picture of our selfs with our hands apart.when we had finished our sign we glued it on to our picture.that is how we made our one word art. I chose sportsmanship because when we have to do stuff together we always get in a fight that's why I chose sportsmanship as my one word for 2016.

Feedback:good job on making easy to read

Feedford:next time you could make it a bit bigger 

Thanks for the feedback and feedford Naomi 

Evaluation:the easyist part was the colouring in but it took a long time. The hardist part was drawing the word because it is hard to do the S's. I think I need to work on making the words stand out but I think I did a good job.