Monday, 14 November 2016

writing time

Description: in writing we could write about any thing and Naomi and I choose to do a story about some tuning that is not real and I have chosen to do a magic pen and she choose a lucky pencil. we made a poster a story and a movie about it. Here they are.
Evaluation: I think I did well at my story but I need to be more ready.

feedback:I think you done well at your story you explained heaps of things.
Feedforward: next time maybe add some detail. Naomi

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