Purpose: create a story to share orally
Description: Oral storytelling is a Maori tradition. We have been planning our own story to tell on the Marae in Week 7.
Feedback: is that I like your story but put more ackshion.
Feedforward: is to speck a bit louder.
I think it was pretty easy but I was a bit shy as wall.
I was really interested to read your evaluation Kayla as you seem VERY confident in your presentation - I was super impressed! I think what Sophie was trying to say was that perhaps you could add more detail - what do you think about that?
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