Thursday, 1 September 2016

writing

Description: in writing we are learning about planning our writing I am in nicks writing group I have written a story about a girl that is stuck in a scary place all by her self here is my slid.




feedback: I think you did well at describing the story.
Feedforward:next time you could not have to many  i's in the story. Naomi 

Evaluation: I found it a little bit hard because I did not know what to do but it got easier when I asked for more help.
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  1. Anonymous14 September 2016 at 02:58

    Amazing Kayla - I am most impressed! You have put a lot of time and effort into this and it has paid off. How has learning to organise your ideas helped you as a writer? Will you continue to use your tools for writing in the future?

    Nic

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