My story about the net ball

WALT: to add impact 

Success criteria: to write a story about what it is like to be a ball

Netball

I fell someone squeezing me! I start felling myself getting

hire and hire all of a sudden I am in the air of a click of a finger.

Did I say that I love it up here in the cold breeze.

I start to travel to the other end. suddenly I fell something grabbing me 

I am going throw a big round thing everybody says "Go THROW THE HOPE"

everybody says "YES". And the same thing goes all over again. I smash

the edge of the hope. I hear a loud noise and everybody goes away.

"Yay finally it is over now" being a netball isn't so bad after all.

Maths portfolio sample

Dicription:in maths we are doing portfolio samples and the one that we are doing id about rebell sports I am in ebonys maths group and the stage group I am In is stage 4. we have been learning fives tens and doubles thay are a bit hard but as you practis it gets esyer and esyer. You will get it write.

Big idear: I worked them out by adding and doubling and using tens.

Feedback/feedforward:

I think that you did a really good job at using the same strategis because you are really good at them. But you could work on using a better strategis because it looks like you only know one you could work on rounding and compensating becase it is a really good strategis you could work on.

aalaa:)

Evaluation I think I need to work on trying harder it is a bit easy but then it gets really tricy.

science portfolio sample

Description:we made a food web based on our lunchboxes we had to find what food comes from where.

Big idear:we had to find out what food comes from where and most food is based on the sun.

Feedback/feedforward:I think you are good at explaining what from what but you need to get better at

taking a clearer picture. Harriet

Evaluation:I think I need to work on ading a bit more information.

My tic tac toe

Description:My reading goal is comprehension every week I go to two workshops and this week we have to do a post for our portfolio. We have a tic tac toe on our divice I chows get creative and it was fun.

Big idear:in poutama we have been going to two work shops every week and to learn the tic tac toe.

Sixsess criteria:when I went to Australia I herd the waves crashing against the racks.

Feedback/feedforward: I like the way that you use net writing so we can read it. I think you need to work on making more room. by kiana

Evaluation:I think I need to work on making it more clearer so we understand.